Cool shit bro
Hey man sweet beat, there's nothing I really wanna say in the way of critiquing or w/e... I just wanted to say you're a dope producer. I know this is like a kind of older beat but I was wondering if I could spit something on this? You can PM me if you want to hear what I got and if you like it maybe we can do this shit.
or if not that's cool too still a good beat
Hey man cool shit, I like the cycling or w/e you used on that synth but you could have used like a higher pitched string synth in addition to it. that might fill out the sound more and add more variety. I like your beat though man I'm feelin the hi hats you're usin. Sounds like it would be some cool shit to rap on if you put just a little phaser and maybe some slight echo on the vocals I think it would sound cool
Well, I'm happy to say this isn't the only version, and the new verion has a change up, and a high pitched kinda low lead so hopefully I can get that out soon man.
thanks for the review.
Ha ha this shit's still wack man
The beat's okay. Your lyrics are really weak though, and your voice is a little low-fi. Maybe if you had a better recording device your flow might sound better, but only if you work on your lyrics. A lot of them sound like you just made them up and they could really use some refining. The hook is terrible too.
this is still pretty old man, lol. The mic sucks I agree tho, n I did make them up lol. Anyways thanks for the feedback
Keep it pimpin'
lol wack shit dude
Your rhymes fuckin blow dude, you have no flow what-so-ever. I'll give you a 2 for the effort, but I'm gonna tell you right now I couldn't even sit through the whole song. I was laughing too hard dog, ha ha
Buddy this is like a year old, also the rhymes had to do with what humpers003 said so y u lookin at ma' old shit in the first place? anyways
That's some funny shit holmes, ha ha. Sweet beat, good flow, it's all good man.
Thanks for checking my shit out too. "Hope you liked it, bitch" ha ha ha
YOU KILLED IT, SON!
Probably the best song I've ever heard. When are we gonna do the remix, dude? We gotta get on that shit. Like the origional only hard, naw mean? I gotta get some vocals on it, I'll get at you about that.
I personally thought this track was fuckin' dope as hell. I dig the ethereal synths n' the boss bass or w/e that is. Everything fits together really well with a kickass beat. We need more stuff like this.
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